How is my band's first song?

Here's a link to my band page on facebook.

http://www.facebook.com/OnThisDayBand

Using the BandPage app, you can scroll down and listen to our first
song we recorded recently.

We have inspiration from bands such as Killswitch Engage, Times of
Grace, Rise Against, and A Day To Remember. What do we sound like to
you? Also, if you like what you hear, please like our page! Thanks!
Most descriptive answer wins.